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A Better Introduction

So I had the first character bible post all written up and ready to go when I realized it was going to be absolutely pointless without some sort of foundation for the story.  What’s the point of knowing about all these characters if you don’t even know where they are or why?  With that in mind, here is a better introduction to the story.

Once upon a time there was a barely habitable planet that the space government decided to use as a prison.  This planet was so cold, it was basically only possible to support life near the equator.  The space government called this prison planet Burg.

Burg

This wouldn’t be just any prison though.  It would be a rehabilitation center for citizens who had turned to committing some “lesser” crimes, such as theft or tax evasion.  Instead of cells, the prisoners were placed in houses.   Every day, they were allowed to go outside for supervised outdoors time. They were allowed to interact with their fellow prisoners, so long as said interactions were friendly and peaceful.

Housing 1

Instead of cell blocks, they had sectors.  The sectors were divided up based on species, so that record keeping for each planet that made use of the prison would be neat and easy.  There were nine planets in total that used this particular prison system.  They were spread out over four solar systems.  The nine alien species found on Burg were (and still are):

Goliaths – Giant, heavy people with stone skin.

Samaki – Amphibious race from a mostly water-covered planet.  Can survive on land for short periods of time.  Have gills.  (Their sector has specially designed houses that are like sad Sea World aquariums.

Creech – Humanoid race with feathers for hair and giant bird wings that they can use to fly.

Bortol – Vaguely canine species with animal snouts that make speech impossible.  Fortunately this species has the ability to communicate telepathically.  Highly developed sense of smell and hearing.

Rizzarian – Lizard-like species with tough scales that coat the body, and hair-like tentacles that grow from the top of their heads.

Delliakite – Somewhat feline species with pure black skin, spindly legs, and knees that bend backwards.  Giant, lidless eyes and small noses and mouths.  Large, semi-feline ears.  Can teleport short distances.

Lepthian – Shape-shifting, amorphous, see-through species.  Can heal minor wounds almost instantly due to fluid bodies.

Human – They look and act like humans from Earth, so they’re called human.  But honestly I’m not trying to imply that Earth exists in this universe.  It’s just there’s already a word for human, so why muddle the issue?

Aodik – Compact, humanoid species with dark hair and purplish skin.  Because they are shorter and not very strong, they often develop technology to do their work for them.

Sectors

Instead of prison guards, the prisoners answered to Enforcers, who kept the peace by patrolling the streets and keeping an eye on things from their encampments between sectors.

Enforcer

Instead of a warden, Burg had an Overseer.  It was this person’s job to keep the Enforcers in line, give out orders, head up certain committees and hearings, and interact with the government outside Burg.  The Overseer’s word was always final in any matter.  But don’t worry, the power definitely didn’t go to any of the Overseers heads.

Overseer

Note: I haven’t decided what species I want to make the Overseer yet, so for now he’s just Evil Space Elvis.

Mandatory re-education programs were conducted on a daily basis in each sector, to help show the prisoners the error of their ways.  Once prisoners had served out their sentence, they were evaluated by a committee and (usually) sent back to their home world to rejoin society.

A second infraction got them sent back to Burg for a slightly more permanent stay.  Unless they moved up from minor to major crime, in which case they went through the more traditional prison systems on their own planets.

Burg’s system worked out well.  Until one day, a war started.  Like they do.  Men and women from the military came to Burg and offered prisoners a chance to wipe the slate clean if they simply fought for their government.

Space Army.jpg

Many prisoners chose to fight.  Others chose to stay.

Years passed, and the war was lost, giving way to a new regime.  Shortly after that, all communications and travel to and from Burg were cut off.

More time passed.  Burg ceased to be a prison or a rehabilitation center or whatever you want to call it.  The new government had no idea it existed, and had no use for an old rehabilitation planet anyway.  Enforcers and prisoners alike were suddenly stuck on this world, with no way of escaping or communicating with their loved ones at home.  Yet, rather than band together, the old dynamic was ruthlessly, well… enforced.

Hundreds of years went by, and Burg became something new.  The prisoners started families.  The Overseer and Enforcers created a government of their own.  Soon only the ancestors of the prisoners, the original Overseer, and the Enforcers remained on the planet.  Yet the descendants of the prisoners were still treated like criminals, despite having committed no crimes.

Resistance groups cropped up within the sectors, attempting to take back their liberty from the unnecessarily cruel Enforcers and Overseer.

None have yet succeeded…

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Chapter Seven

Okay so I’m going to freely admit that I have no idea where I’m going with this book.  My method of writing is to just keep going until stuff comes to me, and as it comes to me, I write it down.  The course of the story is constantly changing.  That being said, I think I have some ideas.  It’s just hard keeping up with my own brain.  So maybe this chapter will be rushed and weird.  I don’t know.  I guess all I’m doing is giving the usual disclaimer: This is very raw and new!  As well as largely unedited.  Please keep this in mind.

Okay here are some links for easy navigation to previous chapters:

Chapter One

Chapter Five

And nowwww:

Chapter-Seven

It took Paxton just over a month before he was able to pin Icthi in combat training. Even then she insisted he had caught her right as she was about to sneeze. Rix later reassured him that she always made up an excuse when they beat her. It was a rite of passage.

“Also, don’t ever think for a second that she couldn’t kill you if she wanted to,” he’d said. “Icthi is vicious. Trust me when I say she holds back during training sessions.”

“Noted,” was Paxton’s reply.

Beating Icthi in a sparring match meant he had finally been cleared for field work. He definitely felt prepared. By that time he was shooting with 92% accuracy, he had an extensive knowledge of emergency procedures and protocol, and Rix had drilled all kinds of first-aid into him.

He was raring to get on the road and put his new skills and knowledge to the test.

“I’ve got a great first assignment for you,” Rix said, clapping him on the shoulder. “I came up with it myself. Korse already cleared it.”

“What is it?”

“I’ll tell you in the morning. Pick you up at your place. Dawn.”

“Dawn’s fine, but I’ll probably be at Kar-Yan’s.”

“Why?” Paxton just looked at him. “Oh…I thought you were hooking up with D’mia.”

“That was last week.”

Rix gave him a look.

“What?” Paxton asked.

“Nothing. Just didn’t take you for the type of guy to work out his problems…you know…vaginally.”

Paxton shrugged. “They come on to me, mostly. A few of them make me describe in detail what it was like to take out that Goliath’s eyes before throwing me into the bed. It’s kinda…unsettling if I think about it too much.”

“It takes a certain type of person to fit into this job,” Rix agreed.

“Yeah…I just don’t know if I should be worried that I seem to fit in so well.”

“Hmm…yeah. I never thought about that either,” he replied, though Rix didn’t seem to be too bothered by it at all.

They fell into silence as they exited HQ and made their way to the apartment block. Rix shrugged as they approached his building.

“Sex now. Worry later,” he said. “How about that?”

“Works for me,” Paxton agreed. “See you tomorrow.”

They parted ways, and Paxton spent the night parting Kar-Yan’s thighs. She was a ferocious lover. He was getting used to losing himself in locking his body with hers…or D’mia’s, or whoever happened to offer.

Still, Rix’s words echoed in his head.

Didn’t take you for the type of guy to work out his problems…you know…vaginally.

Before beating the Goliath in the arena, he hadn’t thought of himself that way either. But here he was.

“Where is your mind?” Kar-Yan demanded from beside him. She was watching him, her gray sheets tangled around her semi-transparent legs.

“Right here,” Paxton murmured, and proceeded to lose himself in her for the second time that night.

 

Someone was knocking on the door.

Paxton groaned and rolled over, his hand coming to rest on Kar-Yan’s soft hip. He tried to go back to sleep, but the person who was knocking was persistent.

“Tell them they have one minute to get out of here before I start breaking bones,” Kar- Yan muttered sleepily.

Paxton groaned and rolled out of bed, pulling on his pants as he headed for the door. Rix was on the other side of it, smiling mischievously.

“Late night?”

“I hate you,” Paxton said.

“Good to hear. Get dressed. It’s time to hit the road.”

Paxton’s response was unintelligible, but he retreated to slip the rest of his clothing and armor on. Kar-Yan was already asleep again. He didn’t even think about waking her to say good-bye.

Rix led him down to a fancy transport, one that had actual seats and looked like it had been built within the past two years.

“It’s going to be a long trip,” Rix explained, seeing Paxton’s raised eyebrows. “I’ll explain on the way.”

They mounted the transport and Paxton took a seat while Rix programmed in coordinates. A moment later, the vehicle jumped to life and began skating down the road, a familiar whirring sound floating from the engine. That sound still made Paxton’s stomach tighten. Force of habit.

“So…” Paxton said as Rix sat down beside him.

“Right, our assignment,” he said, and handed Paxton a file. “Plug that in to your monitor.”

Paxton did as he was told, using the portable computer screen that Rix had given him a few days ago. Every Enforcer had one. It was mainly used to store information and send communications. The images that popped up in front of him now were of a farm and the family that ran it.

“Whicker Farm, up in Sector Seven,” Rix explained. “They’re in charge of all the grain that gets shipped to our HQ, as well as the headquarters in Sectors Five, Seven, and Eight.”

“Okay. What about it?”

“Well…I just happened to be unloading our monthly shipment a couple days ago when I noticed it seemed lighter than usual. So I went back and checked the logs, and sure enough we were being shorted about two kilos. I dug further and found out that this lightening of our shipment has been going on for the better part of a year. They never left out so much that we would miss it, but over time they began to skim off more and more. Just a little bit at a time. When I figured that out, I made some calls. Turns out the HQs in Five, Seven, and Eight have also been receiving a lighter load, though they didn’t notice until I pointed it out. Which is how I got the honor of taking my new partner around to the farm to settle the issue.”

Paxton nodded. This was standard stuff, as far as he could tell, although…

“They had to know they’d get caught,” he said, thinking out loud.

“Bad drought these past couple of years,” Rix told him. “They’re required to send us the agreed upon amount, regardless of if they have enough left over to feed themselves. I imagine they got desperate.”

“Ah.”

“Oh don’t get that look on your face.”

“What look?”

“That weird sympathetic one, like you feel bad for the trinks. It’s not like their lives are that terrible. They get to live on and work their own land, rather than moving their huge family into one tiny, little hovel. It’s a privilege. And they’re abusing it.”

“Right.”

Paxton sat back and scanned the files Rix had given him. Whicker Farm was run by Nano Whicker and his wife Tru. They had seven children. Five daughters, two sons. The eldest daughter was married and had two children of her own. They all lived together in the farmhouse, which was in no way a stately manor, but was certainly better than a house in one of the cell blocks. As Rix had said.

The trip was long. Paxton watched the sunrise over his left shoulder as they headed north toward the farm.

When they arrived, they immediately caught the attention of the group of people who were working the fields. A couple of them – young children – dropped their tools and ran into the house. By the time Paxton and Rix had disembarked from the transport, an older man was walking toward them from the farmhouse. He was followed by a woman, his wife, who was trying and failing to look calm and composed.

“Morning,” Farmer Whicker said as he got closer. “What can I do for you, officers?”

“Hey,” Rix said, all friendliness and smiles. “How are you doing today, sir? Got a minute to talk?”

“Sure do,” Whicker replied easily, though Paxton noticed his Adam’s apple bob as he swallowed.

“Great. Do you wanna do this inside?”

“We’re staying right here,” Paxton said quietly, though both Rix and Whicker heard him just fine.

“Whoops, guess my partner says we have to stay outside,” Rix said. “Is that alright with you?”

“Absolutely,” Whicker said. “What can I help you with?”

“Well, Mr. Whicker, it seems a couple of Enforcer Headquarters have noticed a slight…decline in their grain supply over the month.”

“Did they now? That is odd.”

“Isn’t it?” Rix replied cheerily. “Thing is…you’re the only one supplying us with the grain, so I was wondering if maybe you could help us figure out what was happening to it.”

“Sure wish I could, but I’ve gotta say this is coming as a surprise to me.”

Rix sighed, still smiling. “That is a pickle, isn’t it?” His blaster was in his hand now, though Paxton honestly never noticed him taking it out of the holster. Farmer Whicker sure noticed it, though. “You sure you don’t remember what happened to it?”

“No, sir. I’d tell you if I did. We always carefully measure –”

“Oh, for the sake of the Overseer!” Paxton growled impatiently. He pulled out his own blaster and whipped it across the old man’s face, knocking him to the ground. “This is a ridiculous game.” He leveled his blaster at the farmer’s forehead. “You have three to five seconds to tell me what happened to our grain, depending on how generous I’m feeling right now.”

“I s-swear I d-don’t know!” the old man stuttered, clutching his hand to his bleeding forehead.

Paxton shot him through the shin. The farmer howled with pain as his wife let out a shriek. Someone in the distance yelled, “Da!”

“I’m not going to ask again,” Paxton said. “Next time you lie, I’ll take the other leg.”

“Aw, shoot. You better tell him,” Rix said amicably. Paxton glanced at him for just a second. Had Rix expected him to do this? Had he wanted him to do this?

“I…I d-don’t…”

Paxton rolled his eyes and moved to shoot out the farmer’s other leg, but then Tru Whicker shouted out.

“It was me! Overseer have mercy! I’m so sorry! It was me. We were…we were hungry…”

She ran up to her husband and dropped to her knees, shielding him with her body.

“Fine,” Paxton said, blasting a hole in her head. Her body slumped over while the old farmer screamed. “That was easy.” He raised his voice. “Next time you skimp on the shipment, we’ll level the farm. Yeah? Any questions?”

Everybody was too busy crying or shouting or cowering to respond, but he knew he’d gotten the message across. He holstered his blaster and turned back to the transport.

“Oh, uh…actually,” Rix said, causing Paxton to turn back. “Sorry, one more thing. I know you’re mourning, but we’re going to need seven kilos of grain delivered by tomorrow morning. To each of the HQs you’ve shorted, actually. So that’ll be…twenty-eight kilos total. Sound fair?”

Farmer Whicker was too busy sobbing and clutching his dead wife’s body to be of any help. Instead, a young woman approached from the field, getting close enough to them to be heard and not a step closer.

“We don’t have that much right now. It’s been a hard summer. If you gave us a week or two maybe…”

“Oh, gee…I don’t know,” Rix said, scratching his head with the side of his blaster. “I kinda promised the other guys at Five, Seven, and Eight that we’d have you get the grain to them by tomorrow. So, yeah…you know…do that. Or we’ll kill you all, like my partner said. You know where your farm is right now? The house and all the fields? Those will just be a pile of ash. And there won’t be much left of you besides your charred skeletons, you know? So that’s your choice. We’ll see you tomorrow. Or not. Either way, have a good night, folks!”

Rix practically skipped back to the transport.

The moment they were on the road, Rix let out a whoop and slapped his knee.

“Oh, Lord and Maker, that was fun. Did you see the looks on their faces? And then you just took out his leg. Just like that! You’re a natural.”

“I wouldn’t call it fun…”

“Oh, it’s the best job in the universe,” Rix countered. “Nothing like it. Nothing like the fear.”

“You think they’ll get the grain to us in time?”

“Dunno. We’ll probably kill them all regardless. It’ll be better that way. We can start fresh. Move some other impossibly large family onto the land.”

“Is that really necessary?”

“Oh, you wouldn’t think so, but don’t forget we’re going to leave all their bodies right there. Just picture it: The new family moves in, thinking they’ve stepped up in the world. Maybe they’re already formulating their own plans about how to screw us over. Then, one by one, they start to notice all the bodies of the previous tenants. Suddenly rebelling doesn’t seem so appealing, you know? It keeps ‘em in line real good.”

“You’ve done this once or twice before I take it?”

Rix raised an eyebrow. “What? You think this is the first family that thought they could pull one over on us? This time it was wifey, but before it was a cousin. Before that it was the father. Next time it’ll be the one-year-old.”

“Sounds tiring.”

“That’s because you’re a big ol’ cynic. You need to have more fun. Fun that isn’t between the legs of a woman.”

“You want me to try getting between the legs of a man?”

“Hey, if that’s what you’re in to.” He fell silent for a moment, leaning back and crossing his arms behind his head as he thought. “How about this: It’s still early. Let’s go patrol a bit. That’s about the funnest thing I can think of, brother. I tell ya. Just watching ‘em soil themselves. The children all running inside.”

Rix went quiet again, no doubt lost in pleasant memories of striking fear into the hearts of the citizens.

Paxton shrugged. He couldn’t even begin to imagine what it’d be like to go on patrol. He still remembered running inside as a kid every time he heard an Enforcer transport whiz by. It would be strange to be on the other side of it.

Rix called in to HQ to update them on the farm situation and let them know that he and Paxton were going to patrol.

“There’s not much to it,” he said after he’d ended the call. “Just walk around and look menacing.”

“I think I can manage that.”

“I know you can. Seriously. I think I’m in love with you.”

“Rix, you are sick. You know our love can never be.”

“A man can dream.”

Paxton allowed himself to laugh.

“Here,” Rix said, reaching into a compartment in the floor of the transport. “These ones look more menacing. You fired one yet?”

Paxton accepted an MWt 650 Rifle and looked it over. “No, but I’m sure I can figure it out.”

“I, for one, believe in you. Come on, let’s go have some fun.”

Paxton shrugged and slung the rifle over his shoulder, resting it there as he walked beside Rix down the first block.

It was deserted. But that was expected. The sound of their transport would have been enough to send everyone scrambling for their homes.

The next block over had some more movement. There were children playing in their yards, a few hushed conversations going on between neighbors. Everything fell silent as they walked by, of course. Rix was eating it up, but Paxton wasn’t sure he liked seeing the fear in their eyes.

Over the next few minutes, Paxton allowed Rix to lead him around one corner, then another, going down block after block. He saw where his sadistic partner was leading him, but he didn’t say anything until they were almost there.

“I don’t exactly want to scare the shit out of my old neighbors,” he muttered. “They were always good to me.”

“But that’s just it. They need to know that you’re not one of them now. For all you know they think that you joined up with the Enforcers just to infiltrate us from the inside. You know, like my last partner tried to do? They might believe you’re on their side.”

“I doubt it.”

“Well, let’s just see.”

Something felt wrong. Maybe it was the way Rix had led him right back to where he’d grown up for his first patrol, or the edge in his voice when he talked about his old partner’s betrayal. It was like an itching in the back of Paxton’s mind. He couldn’t put his finger on it, but suddenly he didn’t trust that his partner’s motivations were what he said they were.

They turned down Paxton’s old street as he moved the rifle from over his shoulder to rest the end of it in his left palm.

He saw some new faces in the neighborhood, which made him wonder what had happened to the old ones.

Maybe someone dressed like me dragged them away in the middle of the night.

This wasn’t the first time Paxton wondered if he’d ever be able to use his position to find out what had happened to his father. He didn’t believe for a second that he’d simply abandoned Paxton and his mother. His father, in Paxton’s limited memories, had always been kind. Loyal. Protective.

But he couldn’t look up the file. The moment Korse saw Paxton sticking his nose into confidential reports, he’d be dead. There would be no trial. Just the business end of Korse’s blaster.

“You look distracted,” Rix commented casually. “Having second thoughts?”

“What? No. Why would you even ask that?”

Rix shrugged. “You used to live here. If this is too much for you, say the word and we’ll head back to HQ.”

“It’s not too much for me. I killed a Goliath to be here.”

“Oo, yeah. Wanna describe that in detail for me so I can get off?”

“Shut up.”

Again Paxton found himself smiling, laughing. Until something squishy and wet struck his left cheek, wiping the smile off his face. He whipped around to stare at his assailant, an older woman who had another rotten fruit of some kind clutched in her hand.

“How dare you show your face here?” she seethed.

Paxton only vaguely recognized this woman. She had lived a few houses down from him, maybe. Her eyes were full of hatred and something deeper. Betrayal perhaps. By now a few fearful gazes were turned their way. Meanwhile Rix’s eyes were boring into the back of Paxton’s head. His partner was waiting for something to happen. Suddenly this felt like a test. Maybe it had been all along.

Paxton reached up slowly to wipe the sloppy goo off his face. The woman responded by lobbing a second projectile. He batted it out of the air with his rifle, then aimed the weapon at her chest.

He wondered if he should fire. Just kill her and be done with it. That seemed like an awfully high death toll for his first day. He glanced at Rix with a question in his eyes. His partner spoke up, helping him out.

“Assaulting an Enforcer. That’s worth some time in the tombs, don’t you think?”

“Absolutely,” Paxton said, grateful for the direction.

He lowered his weapon and reached for the pair of cuffs that were hanging from his hip. The woman spat at his feet as he approached.

“How powerful you must feel,” she seethed. “Arresting a defenseless old woman.”

“I’m arresting a person who broke the law,” he said simply, fitting the cuffs around her wrists.

Paxton had been to the tombs only once before, back when he was touring all of the Enforcer facilities with Rix. He had expected screams, rattling chains, retching, maybe even the crack of a whip. Instead, there was only silence.

The quiet was almost unbearable, welcoming them with an icy grip as they led the old woman down its halls.

The tombs were immaculate. Pure white walls, not a spot on them. They walked past rows of cells, each only wide enough to fit an average-sized person. Paxton knew his head would brush the ceiling if he was standing in one, his shoulders would be pressed up against the walls. It was meant to be a tight fit. And if it wasn’t, well…they could change that.

A guard had welcomed them when they walked in, asking them to log the woman’s crime in his monitor. The woman’s ID card was swiped to get her into the system, and then they were ushered through the door, down some steps, and into a long hallway. It was just one of many. The Tombs went deep underground, featuring a thousand identical cells.

They were directed to an empty cell by one of the guards, who then helped to fit the woman into it. She was forced to sit, then the walls were adjusted via a control panel on the outside of the cell. Once they were pressed tightly against her sides, her arms and thighs were shackled together, using a pair of special cuffs – also adjustable – that were attached to the seat. In this way, she was prevented from standing or adjusting her position in any way.

The last thing the guard did was attach a small device to the woman’s temple. She had shown no fear as they’d led her into the cell. Now, though, her eyes opened wide. Her mouth opened in a silent scream.

“What’s it doing to her?” Paxton whispered, his voice hoarse. The clinically clean, quiet place was starting to get to him.

Rix shrugged. “From what I hear, it does something different to everybody. Something about mental pain over physical. The guy who invented those things was…unhinged, to say the least. Maybe he tested them on himself. Naturally we paid him a bundle. You wanna try one on for size?”

“No, thank you.”

The door was closed and locked, blocking the woman’s silent terror from his view.

How long she stayed in there would be up to Korse. After he reviewed her crime, he would decide on what he deemed an appropriate sentence length. The guards would receive a message from him sometime in the next day or two letting them know when she was to be released.

The two Enforcers left the way they came, and took their transport back to HQ.

Paxton immediately went to track down Kar-Yan, but couldn’t find her. While he was looking, he ran into an Enforcer by the name of Ulia. They hadn’t done much more than exchange names in the time since Paxton had started, but now he looked at her with new perspective. She wasn’t shapely, like he was used to, but she was clearly strong. She was thick. And she was a head taller than him. Pretty face, too. Strong features.

“Looking for someone?” she asked, her voice deep and throaty.

“I think I found her,” he replied.

She looked at him, sizing him up, seeing the frenzied look in his eyes. Then she cracked a half smile.

Paxton didn’t let her sleep that night.

 

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Chapter Six

What’s this?  I’m back??  Yes, dear readers, I am.  I have returned from vacation victorious!  I slayed and conquered and roared my triumph up to the night.

What?  That’s how you do vacations, right?

I’m normal!

All said, it took me a while to get back on track with my life and my writing.  But now I can say that I am…getting there.  I at least managed to get Chapter Six down on paper, though I’m not sure how good it is.  Similarly, I have an idea of where I’m going with Chapter Seven, but I’m not sure how good that will be either.  I believe you are sensing a pattern.  Just have mercy is all I’m saying.  This stuff is all so raw still.

If you missed any previous chapters, here is a link that you can easily navigate from:

Chapter One

And nooowwww…

Chapter-Six

By the time she turned three, Joss’ hands were flying; she had proved to be a very talkative child.

It had started with just a couple signs. Two taps on the top of her head with the flat of her hand meant she was calling for daddy, whom she’d never seen without his brimmed hat.

Touching the lips meant hungry.

Closing her eyes and putting her hand over them meant sleepy, nap, or sleep, depending on the context.

Rath picked up on all of this as quickly as she imagined it. When she created a new word, he always confirmed it with her first before sharing with the group.

Like when she’d discovered she had the ability to fly.

At four years of age, she was in a very inquisitive phase. The concept of hearing fascinated her. Every move she made, every action she took, was followed with the same question.

Two head taps, pointing, hands going from closed to open by the ears, palms placed against each other and rubbed back and forth.

– Daddy, this noise make? –

It didn’t matter what she was doing – eating, lying down in bed, jumping up and down, bothering Molt – she was always asking. And Rath would always patiently reply.

– Yes, sweet. That noise make. –

Then she’d let out her weird little giggle and ran off to do something else.

One morning, when Rath came into the room, she ran up and jumped on him. He lifted her into his arms and allowed her to kiss him on the cheek. Then of course she leaned back and asked – Daddy, this noise make? –

In order to reply, he had to set her down. It took him until he’d made it to the sign for “noise” to realize that her feet had never reached the ground. Following his alarmed look, Joss looked down at the ground, which was several inches beneath her bare feet.

She squealed with delight and plopped to the ground, falling unsteadily onto her rump. Then she jumped up and began floating again, rising up several feet into the air this time.

– Sweet, what you do? – he asked slowly.

She had replied with a new sign. Essentially the word “up” repeated twice in quick succession.

– You up up? – he confirmed.

– Yes yes! – she signed back excitedly as she began floating around the room. Then, still hovering, she turned to look at him. – Daddy! Daddy! This noise make? –

Rath recovered from his surprise as quickly as he could and replied. – No, sweet. That no noise make. –

She let out another delighted squeal and began floating all over the room. It turned out that she could only sustain her flight for short periods of time, but that didn’t stop her from landing and taking off over and over again until she was exhaustedly signing that it was time for a nap.

Now, several years later, Joss awoke in her bed. They had recently moved into an old storehouse of sorts, but only after they had spent months staking out the area to make sure that it was, without a doubt, abandoned.

Joss had her own room, which she’d fashioned for herself out of old sheets and some empty boxes they’d found. Thea had followed suit. Then the twins. Molt had made himself a hammock in the rafters, and Het-Lei tended to fall asleep wherever he pleased.

Rath always slept on a cot by the door, so if trouble was coming he’d be the first to hear it.

As Joss rolled out of bed, her fingers automatically found her bandu pole. It was always within arm’s reach, if it wasn’t already in her grasp. She got hold of it and rolled carefully out of bed, keeping the end of the pole pressed to the floor. The vibrations she caused as she touched the floor were barely noticeable. She was getting better at this.

Keeping one hand rested gently on the center of her neck, she began to move out of her room. The pole let her know that no one but her was moving nearby. Maybe the others were already awake. She couldn’t tell how late it was, though she was sure that Thea would still be asleep, since her friend had a penchant for sleeping in.

Joss continued to sneak toward the main room, where she glimpsed Rath and Kanid conversing by their makeshift kitchen. It must have been earlier than she thought, since they appeared to be the only two awake.

Kanid was facing in her direction, but Rath’s back was to her. She smiled mischievously, keeping the fingers of her free hand on her throat. Rath had taught her to do this so she could feel when she accidentally made sounds, or when she successfully produced some after trying. Now she was trying to make sure that not a single thing would give her away as she snuck up on her father.

She moved her feet gently across the floor, sliding them more than lifting them. Kanid glimpsed her as she moved out into the open, but did her the service of pretending not to see her. He continued nodding along to whatever Rath was saying.

She was almost upon him now, so she allowed herself to hover slightly. Just an inch or two. Just enough to ensure she didn’t make a single sound as she closed the gap between her and Rath.

Then, just as she reached him, she lifted her bandu pole, preparing to strike.

Daddy, does this make noise? she thought, grinning, as she brought the pole down toward his head.

His hand shot up quicker than she could anticipate and caught the pole right before it made contact with the top of his hat.

Pouting, Joss landed and waited while he pirouetted, keeping the pole in his grip as he turned to face her.

His smile was smug.

She pulled her stick out of his hand and rested it against her chest while she used both hands to sign.

– How you always know? –

– I your father. –

– I noise make? –

– No, sweet. No noise. –

– Then what? –

– Felt your breath my neck. –

Joss rolled her eyes. Of course. It was always something. In two years of trying, she’d never once been able to catch him by surprise.

Kanid just shook his head.

Sleep well? he asked, and by the way Rath turned to look back at him, she knew that Kanid had made the question audible to both of them.

She nodded.   – Well enough. –

Kanid’s voice was the only one she could hear. And that had taken some doing. When he’d first tried to communicate with her telepathically – the only way Kanid could – she hadn’t been able to process it. Having never heard sound before, she had no idea what to do with the echo of his voice in her head. It took lots of practice and explanation before she was able to distinguish words. But of course, he heard nothing from her. While she obviously had thoughts, they weren’t audible to him.

Which was interesting.

“What’d we miss?” Click asked, exiting his room. His hair was rumpled, and he was rubbing sleepily at his eyes.

Joss felt his entrance thanks to her bandu, and turned to look at him. He waved and repeated his question in a language she could understand. – What I miss? –

– I again fail surprise Rath. –

– I sad. This time I thought you succeed. –

– Next time. –

Switch emerged behind her brother then. Her hair was neatly combed, but she still looked tired.

They exchanged pleasantries, and Kanid began to hand out the breakfast he’d been preparing. Mashed berries on crackers.

They were all sitting around eating when Molt and Het-Lei made an appearance. Not from their beds, but from the door.

It was the only entrance to the building, which made everyone feel quite safe. Rath had had Switch and Click build a device to prevent intruders. It involved a stolen ID card reader and a few other things. Within a few days, they had a way to lock their front door. Everyone in their little family got a key, and anyone who tried to get in without one would set off an alarm. They would also be treated to a nice little shock, courtesy of Click’s wiring prowess.

When Rath turned toward the door, Joss followed his gaze. She had assumed Het-Lei and Molt were still sleeping, since it was still early, judging by the sun peeking in the tiny windows. At first Rath had considered covering up those windows, but in the end he decided it would be more suspicious to any outsiders if they were. Best to leave the building looking as untouched as possible.

“Well?” Rath asked as the two men entered, closing the door behind them.

Het-Lei was rearranging his body from some large, four-legged beast into his usual humanoid form.

“It’s confirmed,” Molt said.

“When?” Rath asked, still not signing.

Joss was used to reading Molt’s lips. He was the only one in their party who had outright refused to study her sign language.

Rath, however, was a different story. Signing when Joss was around had become second nature to him. If he wasn’t doing it now, it was because he was purposefully trying to keep her out of the loop.

“Tonight, it looks like,” Het-Lei said, signing as he spoke.

Rath shot him a warning look. “How many are we looking at?” He was purposefully moving his lips as little as possible, and using vague language so Joss was left as uninformed as possible.

Scowling, she hit his arm with her pole.

He ignored her.

“Ten to fifteen,” Het-Lei replied, still signing. “We think they might be expecting trouble. Might not be worth going.”

– Where go? – Joss asked.

“We’re going,” Rath said, ignoring her.

Joss pushed herself up to her feet and stood between her father and the other two.

– Where where where go go go? –

Whenever she wanted to emphasize something – usually excitement or anger – she repeated the sign. Three repeats on both words would easily convey to Rath exactly how she felt about his subterfuge; she was pissed.

– Please, Joss. This not for you. –

– It for you you you. It for me me me. –

– This time no, sweet. –

– What what what happening? – she demanded.

Rath sighed. – Raid. Free prisoners. –

– I go. –

– No. –

– Yes yes. –

Rath pinned her with a glare and signed “No” five times in a row. He’d never repeated it that many times before. Joss nearly backed down. But that was before Het-Lei oozed up to them and stood where both Joss and Rath could see his hands.

– Why not? – he signed. – She good fighter. We can use her. –

Joss turned to smile at him.

“Het-Lei,” Rath growled. “Go wake up Thea.”

Het-Lei’s eyes widened. “Rath, come on.”

“Do it. We need her here.”

“Punishing me isn’t going to make you feel any less guilty for keeping Joss in the dark,” he grumbled before squelching off toward Thea’s room, his version of stomping.

Rath sighed and looked at Joss. She glared right back at him.

“We’ll uh…we’ve got some new tech to check on back in our room,” Click said, leading his sister away from the scene.

Kanid didn’t leave the room, but he did cross over to the kitchen where he began to idly sort berries. Molt just grunted, spread his wings, and took off for the rafters.

– I want come. – Joss signed.

– I know. –

– Why you no let me? –

– Because I want you safe. Always always always. –

– I want you safe also. –

Rath sighed and reached out for her. She came closer, allowing him to pull her into his lap even though she had long since outgrown it.

They just sat like that for a while, neither saying anything. Then Rath reached out his left hand – the one that she could see – and signed again.

– Please, sweet. Please do this for me. Please stay safe. –

Joss didn’t respond right away. She wanted more than anything to go with them on their raid. But Rath was looking at her with his big, fathomless eyes. They pled with her, making her buckle.

– One time. – she said. – Next time I go. –

Rath smiled and hugged her tight. She pulled away almost immediately and stared at his left hand pointedly.

He shook his head, still smiling, and signed – Deal. –

Then and only then did she smile back and hug him for real.

An otherworldly screech rent the air as they sat together, and though Joss didn’t hear it, she felt it vibrating through her and the bandu.

Het-Lei had finally worked up the nerve to wake Theabella.

He emerged a moment later with one of Thea’s throwing knives embedded in his chest. Wincing, he reached up to pull it out, the fluidity of his form allowing him to heal almost instantly.

“She’s up,” he informed them, signing halfheartedly with one hand.

“Thank you. I promise I’ll make Molt do it next time.”

“Make Molt do it every day for a week. Then we’ll be even. You know healing takes a lot out of me.”

“Sorry, but you were undermining my parenting skills.”

“Rath, that was not my intention. I was attempting to balance you, not undermine you. As a parent, you are soft. I wanted to offer the perspective of someone who sees Joss as an ally, not a daughter.”

“As a friend, I thank you for that,” Rath said after a moment. “As a father…if you ever try to put my daughter in danger again…”

He didn’t finish the statement; it was unnecessary.

Molt, having sensed it was safe to return, dropped to the floor. Click and Switch soon found their way out of their room, and Kanid wandered back from the kitchen area.

Joss turned to Rath. – I want be here. – she signed.

– You can stay. – he replied.

She thanked him and went to sit across from him, knowing that would give her the best view of everyone’s hands. Click and Switch settled in next to her, smiling and waving. She smiled back. Kanid sat next to Rath.

Molt, his wings folded tightly behind him, snorted impatiently and went to lean against the wall by the door.

“I don’t see what the fuss was about,” he said. “If the girl wants to get herself killed, it’s not our problem.”

Switch helpfully signed everything he was saying for Joss, since he refused to. Joss just shook her head, turned to Molt, and offered him just one sign. He didn’t need to know her language to understand what it meant.

“Filthy trink,” he muttered.

The room went dead silent. Then, almost as quickly as that happened, it began to rumble and shake. Dishes rattled. Crates splintered. Molt had to fly into the air to keep from falling over.

Rath stood slowly, the ground shaking even more violently around him.

“You are required to like neither me nor my kin,” he said, his voice low yet somehow audible over the din he was causing. “However, I will not tolerate disrespect, Morlinz Nebolzer. Let this be your final warning.”

The ground instantly stilled, the silence returning.

Molt dropped to the ground and glared at Rath.

“I was already up!” Thea shouted, walking into the room. “What made you think you needed to…” Her voice trailed off as she looked from Molt to Rath. “Oh.”

She made her way over to the little kitchen and grabbed a plate of breakfast. Then she settled down to eat.

Rath was still staring at Molt. The silence was palpable. To everyone but Joss, who simply smiled and reached over to steal a berry off of Thea’s plate, completely ignorant of the tension in the room.

“Sorry,” Molt said, finally.

Rath smiled. “No problem. Have a seat. We’ve got to discuss tactics.”

Switch waved to get Joss’ attention, then signed – Bird boy say sorry. –

Joss laughed. – Dad accept apology? –

– Yes. –

– Then I do also. –

It took less than five minutes for them all to get situated. Despite the drama between Molt and Rath, when it really counted, Molt was right there offering his suggestions and clarifying when he was asked to. He and Het-Lei were an excellent reconnaissance team. They’d been working together for years, and their information was always good. Joss felt her uneasiness slipping away the more they talked; it was clear that they had done a very thorough job, as usual.

Everything would be fine.

Still…she hated saying good-bye.

Even with Rath’s nearly insurmountable telekinetic abilities. Even with Click and Switch decked out in so much high-tech armor that they had both doubled in size. Even with Het-Lei’s ability to transform and heal at will. Even with Thea’s teleportation, stealth, claws, knives, and speed. Even with Kanid’s ability to hear what an enemy was planning on doing before they managed to do it.

Even with all that, she hated saying good-bye. She felt strange doing it. She felt like maybe everything seemed too perfect. That something had to go wrong.

Molt was the last to leave. He shot her an unreadable look before he stepped out the door. It sent a shiver down Joss’ spine.

Then he was gone and she was alone.

She waited a full hour before going out to explore.

Rath had told her before he left that she could go out to search for food and supplies. As long as she stayed close to camp, kept her bandu pole on her at all times, and was back before dark. She’d heard these rules plenty of times before, of course. He’d made a point of listing them for her every day from the moment she’d developed enough to understand them.

 

One – Never let your guard down.

Two – Always be one step ahead.

Three – Never leave camp without your bandu pole. The bandu pole is your best friend.

Four – Always ask for help if you need it.

Five – If you can’t win a fight, run!

Six – Never go anywhere alone, unless given permission to do otherwise.

Seven – Don’t let on that you can’t hear, if you can help it.

 

The list went on. Most of it was about her safety. Rath had made her practice screaming for help, much to the others’ displeasure. Young Joss had had way too much fun keeping her fingers on her throat and trying to produce the biggest possible sound vibrations.

“Just be safe,” Rath had said before he left.

She had hugged him tight, knowing how hard it was for him to allow her to go out alone without a partner. If he’d had his way, she would’ve stayed locked up the whole time they were gone. She suspected Het-Lei had had some influence on her situation.

So she struck out. Bandu pole tight in her grip, canvas bag hung over her shoulder. She had her hair tied back, but several wavy tendrils had escaped. Still, it was out of the way for the most part.

Kanid had planted some small, edible plants in a clearing in the nearby woods when they had first moved to their new home. She went to check on those first. They were still small, but the leaves were green and healthy looking. She offered them a sprinkle of water from her pouch, hoping they would thrive. So far Switch’s invention was keeping away the various woodland creatures that might be tempted to snack on Kanid’s garden. It was essentially a small, electrified fence. It delivered a small shock to anyone who tried to pass through it. Hartlings and cornils were deterred without being harmed. Insects were fried on the spot.

Joss, meanwhile, knew how to step over the thing. She did so now as she left the garden to soak up the bright sunlight.

There was a stream not too far from their home. She figured she could catch a few fish for her dinner. But as she turned to push her way out of the trees, she felt it. Just the slightest of vibrations in her bandu pole.

Someone was coming.

It was too big to be a Hartling. An Enforcer, perhaps? Or was she just being paranoid?

She kept her bandu pole pressed into the earth, not showing any sign that she had noticed something approaching.

The vibrations were getting stronger. He was behind her now. She took a deep breath. If it was a Goliath, she would employ Rule Number Five (If you can’t win a fight, run!). If it was a Kreech or a Bortol, she would fight. She’d been able to take those guys on since she was seven.

She waited just a moment longer, still feigning ignorance. The vibrations were stronger now. It was time.

She hefted the pole, spun it over her head, and whirled to face her attacker.

He seemed just as surprised to see her as she was to see him.

Despite the Enforcer armor he wore, Joss paused before attacking. He was limping terribly, his eyes wide and panicked.

Human? she thought.

She’d never seen a human Enforcer before, but there was no doubt that she was looking at one now. His skin and hair were dark, his hands worn and scarred.

Blood was seeping out from between his fingers where he was clutching his side, and he was holding most of his weight on his right leg. She noticed that his left leg was sticking out at a strange angle, as if the bone had been broken once and then set wrong.

As her eyes moved back up to his face, she realized he’d been talking.

When she just cocked her head and looked at him, he repeated himself. This time she was able to read his lips.

“Help me,” he pleaded. “They think I killed the Overseer.”

Then his eyes rolled back in his head and he collapsed.

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Look out for Chapter Seven over the next couple days!  Hopefully tomorrow, but I can’t promise that.

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